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Dear Journal,


My editor is the best! She is not only good at her job, but she also enjoys it, which makes her a joy to work with. We were laughing recently because she came across this funny mistake that all the other people who edited the book missed (even her on her first round). There is a scene in my book, The Story, where three of my characters enter a wooded area, and the main character, the narrator, explains how well he and his two friends work together due to their time fighting in wars together. But the way I wrote the sentence made it sound like they had fought battles with bushes! It was so funny! You had to be there, I guess.


My editor and I were still laughing about the mistake when I had a sudden idea to create a species resembling bushes. I would love to have a species like that in one of my future books, and I actually sat down and worked on a sketch the other day. It didn’t turn out great, but I will work on it and see what I come up with.


Anyways, book one is on its way! Set to release this August, I am so excited to share it with everyone! The journey has just begun, and soon I will be off to finish up the second book!


Sincerely,

Ondrea Keigh


Cover for The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe by C. S. Lewis, depicting Mr. Tumnus, a Narnian fawn.

Today, on Let’s Talk Books!, I thought it would be fun to jump into a world many are familiar with, the Chronicles of Narnia! While I have only read about half of them, these classic stories by C.S. Lewis are some of my personal favorites, and I know they still have many fans around the globe. One of the best things about these books is the fantastic world that C.S. Lewis created in these relatively simple but masterful works of art! If you have not yet read the Chronicles of Narnia books, check out the list at the end of the post!


Worldbuilding is a multi-faceted process. But for today, I will focus on grounding the reader in the scene. As a reader, I know how important it is to give the reader something to ground them in the story’s environment. There are many ways this can be done. It can be done with an element so subtle the reader doesn’t even notice, or it can be something that stands out in clear contrast to a particular scene. One of my favorite examples of a grounding element in storytelling is found in The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe, by C.S. Lewis.


For those who have not read this first book in the series, there are spoilers ahead! If you have not read the book, I advise taking a break and checking out this first book in the series, and possibly The Magician’s Nephew, as I will also discuss some plot points in that book. So here is a paragraph break to give you a chance to save this post for later so you can come back.


The Lamp of Narnia

The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe begins in London during World War II. Four siblings, Peter, Susan, Edmond, and Lucy Pevensie, are sent to live in the country, away from the dangerous air raids of the war. The catalyst, a game of hide and seek played by the bored Pevensie children, thrusts Lucy into the World of Narnia for the first time. When Lucy first stumbles upon Narnia, she comes to a story element that stands today as an iconic element of Narnia. A lamp. Much like the streetlamps in World War II era London, this lamp is a curious object in the world of Narnia, as it resembles more closely a time period that Narnia does not seem to reflect (though we all know that time is not standard in Narnia). Items such as flashlights do not exist in Narnia, and the choice weapons are swords, knives, and arrows. So why is this lamp here?

Interestingly, the lamp’s presence is explained in The Magician’s Nephew, the second to the last book in the Chronicles of Narnia series. But that is a discussion for another time. Today, I want to discuss why the lamp is such a brilliant worldbuilding tool.



A Light to Mark the Way

A sketch showing Mr. Tumnus rushing through the snow towards the lamp of Narnia

Worldbuilding encompasses more than just the details the author includes to build the story setting. It is everything that goes into making that world seem tangible in the reader’s mind. Simple elements can have a much more profound impact on the reader than even the reader might notice. The lamp of Narnia is no different. Narnia's iconic lamp serves many purposes in The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe. It acts as an emotional anchor for Lucy, as this is where she first meets a Narnian, Mr. Tumnus, and a locational anchor, eventually helping her find her way back to the wardrobe later in the story. But the lamp doesn’t only act as an emotional and locational anchor for Lucy. It also offers the audience the same things and more.



A Transitional Element

In addition to being an emotional and locational anchor for Lucy and the audience, the lamp of Narnia helps both transition from one world to another. Its “real world” familiarity almost softens the abrupt change in environment. C. S. Lewis, whether he did this on purpose or not, cleverly does not reveal that the lamp is “out of place” until the first Narnian reveals himself, and Lucy and the audience fully realize that this place she has found is entirely unusual. Because there is this moment when the lamp seems normal, the switch from London during wartime to a quiet, snow-covered landscape in a mysterious unfamiliar land is no longer as big of a jump for both Lucy and the readers to make. The lamp gives the audience a visual anchor that bridges the gap between the two worlds, allowing all to slip from one place to the next almost seamlessly.


A Subtle Foreshadow

The lamp of Narnia also seems to represent something about Narnia that the characters don’t learn until later on. There is one who can set Narnia free of the White Witch’s evil reign. As previously mentioned, the lamp that seems to be described in the books resembles those used in London during the 1940s. These lamps were gas lamps. This meant they produced some heat. Again, whether C. S. Lewis intended to do this, I am not certain. But, through this lamp, it seems he hinted at what would happen at the end of the book using heat and light. Among the cold land ruled by the White Witch, the lamp stands as a small spark of heat. Heat melts ice, maybe a symbol of the Witch’s soon-to-be-ended reign. Among the darkness of evil, the lamp offers light. A small spark of what is to come? As the story progresses, Aslan shows up and makes the ultimate sacrifice to save Edmond and free the land of the White Witch’s control. That lamp that stood in the midst of enemy territory may have hinted at the light of Aslan that would return and defeat the White Witch.


Simple and Iconic


A sketch of Narina's iconic lamp in a snow cover landscape.

The lamp of Narnia is an iconic element of the Chronicles of Narnia, even though it is only mentioned in two books. Such a simple detail can lead readers to grasp the story in ways they might not have done without it. I can’t imagine Narnia without its iconic lamp. Can you? Share your thought in the comments!


If you want to know what I thought of the Chronicles of Narnia books, subscribe to my newsletter here! I love these books and have yet to finish a few, so I have added this series to my reading list! When I finish each, I will share my thoughts in my Let’s Talk Books! newsletters!




The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

Prince Caspian

The Voyage of the Dawn Treader

The Silver Chair

The Horse and His Boy

The Magician’s Nephew

The Last Battle



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A children's book with a picture of a father asleep in a chair, and a child still awake sitting in his lap. They are surrounded by nursery rhyme characters.

I don’t know about you, but I have retained my love of children’s books into adulthood. They are so fantastical and fun! Some are educational, and some are just for entertainment, but what really gets me is how much storytelling happens in such a short amount of time. Within the thirty or so pages in a children’s book, there is a setup, catalyst, midpoint, fun and games, and more! Sometimes there is even a dark night of the soul (if you don’t know what that is, check out the Save the Cat! Writes a Novel), and a conclusion. If you have ever written a short story, you know that is impressive! In addition to these short stories that hit all the writing beats, they often hit all the right emotions. A good children’s book will hold both the parent and child’s attention from front to back (Though not always. As parents know, some days, you only get through two pages, and that is completely okay. If we adults are honest, it happens to us too) and lead them through an emotional experience for the whole family. Because children’s books are such a blast and can be enjoyed by both young and old, I thought it would be fun to include a children’s book of the month on my blog! At the beginning of each month, I will review and discuss a children’s book that you can share with others of all ages!


Children's Book of July!

To kick off the Children’s Book of the Month posts, I decided to discuss one of my personal favorites, Once Upon a Time, the End (asleep in 60 seconds). This book was actually one that I stumbled upon later in life, and my family thought it was so funny we just had to have it in the house. My nieces and nephews and many of my friends’ children love this book, and it is one I make sure to share every chance I get!


Book Information

Title: Once Upon a Time, the End (Asleep in 60 Seconds)

Author: Geoffrey Kloske

Illustrator: Barry Blitt

Theme: Bedtime

Plot: Tired, desperate dad. Not so tired, energetic child.

Page Count: 27 pages of story


My Review

Every parent has had nights when their kids just won’t go to sleep. If that has happened to you, you need this book! Its quick-paced story follows a dad desperate to get his child to bed. In his own need for sleep, the father begins shortening story time in hopes it will help speed things up. As to whether it works or not, well, you will just have to read the story.


Written by Geoffrey Kloske, with illustrations by Barry Blitt that add to the hilarity of the father’s storytelling prowess, this book is sure to keep both you and your child entertained. But with the spot-on desperation of the book’s leading father figure, you just might laugh as much, or more, than your child! In short, Once Upon a Time, the End (asleep in 60 seconds) tells an engaging and funny story accompanied by characters and art that offer a fantastic, not-so-exaggerated depiction of life with a child. The story progresses nicely and remains entertaining to the last page. As a storyteller, book lover, and auntie to many nieces and nephews, I give this book a five-star rating!


But don't just take it from me, let's hear some feedback from both parents and their little ones!



Family Reviews

Alyssa and Chandler

With a rating of four out of five stars, Alyssa said, “I loved the illustrations in this book! They express perfectly the feeling of trying to get your child to bed when they are “not tired”!”


Alyssa's daughter Chandler also liked this book. When asked how happy the book made her, very unhappy, unhappy, neutral, happy, or very happy, she chose "happy." As for her favorite part, Chandler liked, "The kid falling asleep on top of the dad!"


Kate and Josiah

With a rating of five out of five stars, Kate said, “I like the hidden jokes for parents who know the original stories much better, but it's still a fun one for the kids. My favorite short stories in the book are little red riding hood and sleeping beauty.”


Kate's son Josiah (age 3) also rated this book as making him feel “happy”. He told us about his favorite parts, saying. “I liked the first page. I liked the three bears.” Referring to the book's take on Goldilocks and the Three Bears.


Check out Once Upon a Time, the End (Asleep in 60 Seconds) and share your thoughts in the comments below!




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